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I had never seen the rain. Not like this, anyway. Not on the day we met, huddled under a tree waiting for the bus, when we were cold and drenched but still smiling. Not on the night everything fell apart in your living room, when our yelling drowned out the thunder in the sky.
This time it's different. It's the same thick veil of rain I've seen so many times in movies, but this time, it feels like a sign. The torrential downpour is reminiscent of so many nights I spent with you, and it brings a sinking feeling to my stomach.
When my phone buzzed on my bedside table last night, illuminating the darkness of the walls with your name on the screen, I began to hear a low rumble from the clouds. As the rain fell down past my window, I laid in bed, my heart skipping beats every time the lightning mimicked the glow of the phone.
You'd asked to see me. To meet up with me, at your house that I haven't seen in so long. I thought of the memories and the fights and the sour note we'd left off on. I should have said no. But when I woke up to a message asking if I still knew the way, without question I replied that I never forgot.
Now I'm here, standing across the street from the old house I became so familiar with, and I wonder if you can see me through the window, if you're watching, if you're waiting. The precipitation provides a curtain between me and you, almost, but just to be sure, I hold my umbrella lower and cover my face.
My legs feel weak. My heart thuds hard against my ribs. I take a breath. My feet move forward despite the muddle of protests flooding my brain. Part of me wants to stop, turn around, hurry home and never once look back. But I find myself inching closer to the curb, peering out from the umbrella's edge to look both ways down the street, and crossing.
I stop in front of your front steps, my sneakers becoming waterlogged as I stand with uncertainty in a puddle. Breathing in the smell of the rain, I continue on, one creaky wooden step at a time. Slowly I reach up, knocking on the splintered wood of your door. I wait.
Hours pass by in seconds. My mind is a mess of worry and doubt. Was this a mistake? Should I turn and run while I still have the chance?
My hands grip the handle of my umbrella tighter as I worry on my lower lip. I focus my attention on a newspaper, folded up in a clear plastic bag on your doorstep. The bag is littered with raindrops but beneath the surface I read the week's forecast on the corner of the front page: one full week of rain.
My eyes snap up when the door pulls open, revealing the face I haven't seen in months. Every thought stored up since last night disappears as my mind goes blank. All is silent except for the sound of the rain.
This time it's different. It's the same thick veil of rain I've seen so many times in movies, but this time, it feels like a sign. The torrential downpour is reminiscent of so many nights I spent with you, and it brings a sinking feeling to my stomach.
When my phone buzzed on my bedside table last night, illuminating the darkness of the walls with your name on the screen, I began to hear a low rumble from the clouds. As the rain fell down past my window, I laid in bed, my heart skipping beats every time the lightning mimicked the glow of the phone.
You'd asked to see me. To meet up with me, at your house that I haven't seen in so long. I thought of the memories and the fights and the sour note we'd left off on. I should have said no. But when I woke up to a message asking if I still knew the way, without question I replied that I never forgot.
Now I'm here, standing across the street from the old house I became so familiar with, and I wonder if you can see me through the window, if you're watching, if you're waiting. The precipitation provides a curtain between me and you, almost, but just to be sure, I hold my umbrella lower and cover my face.
My legs feel weak. My heart thuds hard against my ribs. I take a breath. My feet move forward despite the muddle of protests flooding my brain. Part of me wants to stop, turn around, hurry home and never once look back. But I find myself inching closer to the curb, peering out from the umbrella's edge to look both ways down the street, and crossing.
I stop in front of your front steps, my sneakers becoming waterlogged as I stand with uncertainty in a puddle. Breathing in the smell of the rain, I continue on, one creaky wooden step at a time. Slowly I reach up, knocking on the splintered wood of your door. I wait.
Hours pass by in seconds. My mind is a mess of worry and doubt. Was this a mistake? Should I turn and run while I still have the chance?
My hands grip the handle of my umbrella tighter as I worry on my lower lip. I focus my attention on a newspaper, folded up in a clear plastic bag on your doorstep. The bag is littered with raindrops but beneath the surface I read the week's forecast on the corner of the front page: one full week of rain.
My eyes snap up when the door pulls open, revealing the face I haven't seen in months. Every thought stored up since last night disappears as my mind goes blank. All is silent except for the sound of the rain.
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I Know
I know this fire.
This deep brittle burning.
These ashes know my name.
We are familiar.
I know how you feel.
This hurt; this raw pain.
This sick, twisting, contortion of your heart.
To be told there's nothing to worry about.
When it's a lie to your face.
Trust me, I know.
When in a moment, six years burns away into nothing.
Words.
Words.
Words...
are all that's left.
In memory.
In writing.
Etched into your skin.
Clawed into your brain now.
A haunting whisper that never goes away.
I know this feeling.
And though it never fully heals...
I am here for you.
Literature
Things they don't tell you.
Things they don’t tell you about losing your grandfather on a Tuesday night:
When you wake the next morning, you still
need to get out of bed in time for work, you still
have to shower, dress yourself, eat breakfast, brush
your teeth and hair;
and when your mother calls
to check in, you have to comfort her because she lost
her dad last night;
and when you call your grandmother
your voice cannot waver lest you upset her, because
she lost a man she's known for seventy years and even
though she would never hold it against you, you still
feel obligated not to cry;
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Writer
I am a scientist;
Pinning down ideas
like butterflies
preserving them in
their fragile beauty
as I take away their freedom,
their life.
I am a parasite;
sucking the soul out
of music and leaving it
a hollow shell
that plays like
the noisy silence in
my ears.
I am a thief;
taking what is not mine,
the world around me,
and pouring it into
a mould that
I claim is
my own.
I am a blasphemer;
playing God in a
sacred place, changing
the world to my
liking when the orchestra
is not under my
conduction.
I am a liar;
selling false havens
to lonely runaways,
giving them a glimpse
of a world more glamorous,
more fantas
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Another creative writing prompt, from a while ago. Had to revise it as part of my final.
The prompt was "I had never seen the rain. Not like this, anyway."
I suck at titles so this one's just from a Motion City Soundtrack song.
The prompt was "I had never seen the rain. Not like this, anyway."
I suck at titles so this one's just from a Motion City Soundtrack song.
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